Haiku for life

[CCoburn]

Sorry guys.  I wrote a haiku, but then realized after the fact that I had (6) syllables in the 1st line, not (5), thus my "Oops" comment.

I'm not much for haiku, so I just deleted it.

The problem with the last one that I wrote is that I thought someone might get the wrong idea also "after the fact ". Sometimes these extremely brief literary pieces can go a couple different ways with the interpretation. Explicitly, my last one was a reference to Putin from within the "doomsday clock" context.

I count the syllables with my fingers so there's not much chance of messing up there unless I'm thinking 5 when it should be 7 or vice versa, and I could write haikus, play literary games, and write short pieces many times a day every day whereas FCD appears more as the articulate volume writer like your typical author just typing away – not much for brevity (IMO).

[UltraBudgie]

Never oops but only
Lovely happy accidents
So says chia-hair Bob

[CCoburn]

My tears touch the ice
Which is melted by the fire
Enter Ragnarök

Enter Ragnarök
O Fortuna the hammer
Cry metal thunder

[argentus]

Sorry guys.  I wrote a haiku, but then realized after the fact that I had (6) syllables in the 1st line, not (5), thus my "Oops" comment.

I'm not much for haiku, so I just deleted it.

I often write something within the general cadence of a haiku, and then I go back and tweak it into compliance with the count.  

I know you know what I'm talking about.   Cheers 

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Never oops but only
Lovely happy accidents
So says chia-hair Bob

I absolutely LOVE this haiku.   Just leaves a person with a quirky happy feel.   PERfect.   I am ... betickled.  (just tried to embed the copywrite symbol)

[FlyingClayDisk]

I often write something within the general cadence of a haiku, and then I go back and tweak it into compliance with the count.  

I know you know what I'm talking about.   Cheers 

Oops, tried a Haiku
Had too many syllables
Then had to bag it.

[argentus]

Oops, tried a Haiku
Had too many syllables
Then had to bag it.

Then had to bag it
Or, Did I DARE to frag it?
Verily, I did!!

[UltraBudgie]

Fly little shield-bug
I opened up the window
But you won't go out


i mean its been like three days now and he just wants to hang around inside. its not even bad weather out. he just keeps popping up every once in a while and i'm like "oh. you're over here now. hello."

"bzzzddt".

how can i be lonely with friends like these?

[Maxmars]

It's watching me now
That tiny interloper
Chasing the white screen.

[Maxmars]

Dove, robin, dove, sparrow
All in a row, at peace
Morning has broken

[UltraBudgie]

Fall has shown its face
No cared to vote and now
Orange is the new black