JonBenet

[Quantum12]

So you are right! The time of death would not even matter.

lol I never got the PM haha! It went to you! I will check again

That's an interesting point Quantum. Rigor mortis had set in but no such test was made as far as i know. I'm not sure though if an accurate time of death would have solved anything unless it didn't agree with her parents account. That account meant her death occurred between 10.30pm and 7am when the note was found.
The case appeared for me as a Youtube suggestion and I had never heard of it before. I spent a few days on it out of curiosity. I think that little poem is my catharsis lol. I should maybe have added a verse or two on theories and my own opinion on the matter but I could go on forever.

Thanks for commenting Quantum, you are very kind. I did send you a PM but I'm not much of a navigator on here and think I somehow managed tp send it to myself. I've sent two PM's that appear in my own inbox lol.

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Thanks expert! I'm not sure I could ever live up to fabulous lol. I kind of like the idea of writing little sort of nursery rhymes. Its natural for me. Silly I know and anyone could probably do it. There are so many clever people here.

Thanks again!

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Well, that's an amazing coincidence, midicon. It shows your poem resonates in that direction.

I think the length and detail is just right. Perhaps it could be worked into multiple poems, narrating the story like a 3 Act structure. I believe that would help in avoiding trivializing the case, which I don't think you have at all.

Nice new shinny Badge!!!!