JonBenet

[midicon]

Well, that's an amazing coincidence, midicon. It shows your poem resonates in that direction.

I think the length and detail is just right. Perhaps it could be worked into multiple poems, narrating the story like a 3 Act structure. I believe that would help in avoiding trivializing the case, which I don't think you have at all.

I think that's a neat idea Encia. I might pursue that and see where it goes. A three part structure could complete it. There is more than enough material. These things really write themselves, I just choose which words I find most appealing.

Thank you for taking the time to post and give feedback!