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JonBenet
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(09-06-2024, 04:55 AM)Encia22 Wrote: Excellent and enjoyable, midicon. I like the unusual, almost rhetorical format. The theme makes it like Cluedo in poetry, if that makes sense.

Now that I see that this is an actual real murder case, of which I was oblivious, it all makes sense and makes your poem even more poignant and worth re-reading more attentively.

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Thanks Encia! Funnily enough I almost included the word 'cluedo'! All those little elements i include are parts of the story..even the knot and web! I could have included more, there is a long list. I forget that people might not understand my innuendos. The housekeeper for instance was employed by the Merry Maids cleaning company and she was a suspect. I'm not making light of the little girl's death though.

Thanks Encia, you always pop up up and say nice things!
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JonBenet - by midicon - 09-05-2024, 07:55 AM
RE: JonBenet - by Quantum12 - 09-05-2024, 07:46 PM
RE: JonBenet - by midicon - 09-06-2024, 12:03 AM
RE: JonBenet - by Quantum12 - 09-06-2024, 10:25 AM
RE: JonBenet - by FlyersFan - 09-06-2024, 12:04 PM
RE: JonBenet - by midicon - 09-06-2024, 12:26 PM
RE: JonBenet - by xpert11 - 09-05-2024, 11:36 PM
RE: JonBenet - by CCoburn - 09-06-2024, 01:20 AM
RE: JonBenet - by midicon - 09-06-2024, 03:10 AM
RE: JonBenet - by l0st - 09-06-2024, 08:59 PM
RE: JonBenet - by midicon - 09-07-2024, 03:24 AM
RE: JonBenet - by Encia22 - 09-06-2024, 04:55 AM
RE: JonBenet - by midicon - 09-06-2024, 05:04 AM
RE: JonBenet - by Encia22 - 09-06-2024, 05:33 AM
RE: JonBenet - by midicon - 09-06-2024, 06:08 AM
RE: JonBenet - by Encia22 - 09-06-2024, 06:13 AM
RE: JonBenet - by Maxmars - 09-15-2024, 07:37 PM
RE: JonBenet - by midicon - 09-16-2024, 12:12 AM
RE: JonBenet - by l0st - 09-24-2024, 01:47 AM

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