(09-06-2024, 04:55 AM)Encia22 Wrote: Excellent and enjoyable, midicon. I like the unusual, almost rhetorical format. The theme makes it like Cluedo in poetry, if that makes sense.
Now that I see that this is an actual real murder case, of which I was oblivious, it all makes sense and makes your poem even more poignant and worth re-reading more attentively.
Thanks Encia! Funnily enough I almost included the word 'cluedo'! All those little elements i include are parts of the story..even the knot and web! I could have included more, there is a long list. I forget that people might not understand my innuendos. The housekeeper for instance was employed by the Merry Maids cleaning company and she was a suspect. I'm not making light of the little girl's death though.
Thanks Encia, you always pop up up and say nice things!