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THE COLLECTIVE (SCI-FI -- A ONE PAGE STORY)
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(12-07-2023, 02:21 PM)YouSir Wrote: "Hello Annee I really enjoyed your story...There are so many directions you could take with this... The same rote of tedium with the daily effort to sustain life when on an especially boring day... something unexpected and wonderful happens...Something so...other...that it brings excitement and adventure into the midst of the colonists...Or not...Cool story Annee...thank you for sharing it...    YouSir"

Thank you.  Yes, it is meant to have kind of a "second thought" kick to it after the initial read.

Is perfect really perfect?

ANNEE
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RE: THE COLLECTIVE (SCI-FI -- A ONE PAGE STORY) - by ANNEE - 12-07-2023, 08:09 PM

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