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HORIZON – A LOVE STORY (I write one page stories)
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A profound love story, Annee!
 
I like how you begin with a question, one that I could relate to and answer affirmatively. From that point, I felt part of your narrative. Leaving the end open made me look to that “virtual” horizon for the possible outcome, thus looping back to your first paragraph’s premise.

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RE: HORIZON – A LOVE STORY (I write one page stories) - by Encia22 - 11-27-2023, 09:43 AM

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