THE COLLECTIVE (SCI-FI -- A ONE PAGE STORY)

[ANNEE]

This is wonderful ANNEE

Thank you.

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That was a good read.
On the surface it seems idyllic.
Have to admit to being turned off by the inevitability of each day in thet colony though, there doesnt appear to be any room for a rebel does there?

Exactly!!!

It may seem like a simple little story on the surface but if it sticks in your brain that it's a bit disturbing, then I've accomplished my writer's goal.

Thank you.  ANNEE