10-23-2024, 05:49 AM
That’s a fantastic and potentially terrifying story, Max.
The build up to the apparition’s presence was worth the attentive read. Often there are clues, even if subconscious and unintentional on your part, that come back full circle at the end. In this case, the happy family depicted initially, with a barely large enough house, now has to make room for ‘one’ more; leaving the burning question: will this entity disrupt the family’s tranquility?
I’d love to know how this evolves, and why are the father and daughter so attuned to the spirit world, less so, the mother?
The build up to the apparition’s presence was worth the attentive read. Often there are clues, even if subconscious and unintentional on your part, that come back full circle at the end. In this case, the happy family depicted initially, with a barely large enough house, now has to make room for ‘one’ more; leaving the burning question: will this entity disrupt the family’s tranquility?
I’d love to know how this evolves, and why are the father and daughter so attuned to the spirit world, less so, the mother?