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10-07-2024, 06:40 AM

That’s great for your first poem, xpert11!

I’ve never been an advocate of poems having to follow strict rules, metrics, etc.; in fact, the more freestyle it is, the more it feels natural and born of emotions. It’s not the chosen words that move the reader, but rather the whole ensemble.

Your poem is melancholic and thought provoking, yet harbours hope.

Beer

"Should auld acquaintance be forgot and never brought to mind?
Should auld acquaintance be forgot and auld lang syne?"
~ Robert Burns

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New Dawn - by xpert11 - 10-07-2024, 01:34 AM

RE: New Dawn - by UltraBudgie - 10-07-2024, 03:06 AM

RE: New Dawn - by Encia22 - 10-07-2024, 06:40 AM

RE: New Dawn - by Quantum12 - 10-07-2024, 07:39 AM

RE: New Dawn - by CCoburn - 10-08-2024, 12:10 AM

RE: New Dawn - by xpert11 - 10-08-2024, 05:30 AM

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