(09-22-2024, 12:18 AM)UltraBudgie Wrote: Her Golden Ticket
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I love "As clear as molten sugar"!
I know I'm way off base, but your poem brought to mind the life of a queen bee. I don't know why and I can't consolidate the ending with that notion, but that's the vision in my mind, and I can't shake it.
I'm sure Quantum12 is on the right track.