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09-20-2024, 06:37 PM
(09-20-2024, 04:21 PM)UltraBudgie Wrote: I like how you moved the rhyme to the front of the line More like added it. Both S2 and S4 employ this technique. I don't recall ever doing this myself or seeing it elsewhere. It's a fairly effective technique if you can do it without sacrificing quality of content in the process; I'd say they were successful in accomplishing that. | ||||||||||
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Sailboat of Time - by Quantum12 - 09-20-2024, 03:19 PM
RE: Sailboat of Time - by UltraBudgie - 09-20-2024, 04:21 PM
RE: Sailboat of Time - by Quantum12 - 09-20-2024, 04:27 PM
RE: Sailboat of Time - by CCoburn - 09-20-2024, 06:37 PM
RE: Sailboat of Time - by Quantum12 - 09-20-2024, 09:46 PM
RE: Sailboat of Time - by midicon - 09-21-2024, 02:15 AM
RE: Sailboat of Time - by Quantum12 - 09-21-2024, 06:59 AM
RE: Sailboat of Time - by midicon - 09-21-2024, 07:08 AM
RE: Sailboat of Time - by Quantum12 - 09-21-2024, 07:39 AM
RE: Sailboat of Time - by CCoburn - 09-21-2024, 08:08 AM
RE: Sailboat of Time - by Quantum12 - 09-21-2024, 08:13 AM
RE: Sailboat of Time - by CCoburn - 09-22-2024, 08:02 AM
RE: Sailboat of Time - by Quantum12 - 09-22-2024, 09:10 AM
RE: Sailboat of Time - by CCoburn - 09-21-2024, 07:38 AM
RE: Sailboat of Time - by Encia22 - 09-21-2024, 12:46 PM
RE: Sailboat of Time - by Quantum12 - 09-21-2024, 01:11 PM
RE: Sailboat of Time - by Encia22 - 09-21-2024, 01:23 PM
RE: Sailboat of Time - by Quantum12 - 09-21-2024, 01:51 PM
RE: Sailboat of Time - by Encia22 - 09-21-2024, 07:12 PM
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