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The sisters
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@Encia22 and @CCoburn

Thanks for not embarrassing me in front of the others.   Tongue

Unlike you two, my writing skills are nowhere near the "showing off" level of proficiency.   But sometimes I write (sort of like 'doodling') and then I look at what I wrought and think "I'm not sure that really communicates what I was thinking."  

You have restored my faith that the effort can be saved as much by the reader as the writer.  Had no one said anything at all, I would have probably hung my head in metaphorical shame, thought myself far out of my depth, and moved quietly onward.

I noticed, only after the fact, the 'compositional' structure I fell into... it was not achieved with any strategic forethought (another sign that I am not a pro),  I am glad it worked out to be a comfortable way to convey the thoughts I was having.

The inspiration was the idea that the old wisdom about love remains ultimately (and stubbornly) valid; that faith without love is mockery, and hope without faith is illusion.
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The sisters - by Maxmars - 08-28-2024, 03:35 PM
RE: The sisters - by Encia22 - 08-29-2024, 07:48 AM
RE: The sisters - by CCoburn - 08-29-2024, 01:09 PM
RE: The sisters - by Maxmars - 08-29-2024, 03:26 PM
RE: The sisters - by Encia22 - 08-30-2024, 05:53 AM
RE: The sisters - by Quantum12 - 08-29-2024, 04:17 PM
RE: The sisters - by KTemplar - 08-31-2024, 06:44 PM
RE: The sisters - by xpert11 - 09-05-2024, 09:38 PM

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