07-21-2024, 02:05 PM
This post was last modified 07-21-2024, 02:17 PM by Maxmars.
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I wanted to thank you.
Your words struck me harmonious.
It made me think...
So long as I live, I will marvel at how you made me shine.
My heart changed and grew,
from a cool glow, sufficient to see
to warm fire, lending some comfort to others.
Gone or not, you still reach me,
Gone or not, I still reach for you.
Heart broken, but better for the gift of you.
[I took the liberty of fixing the formatting of your lines... please forgive me if you think it presumptuous; I meant it in respect. It can be undone.]
Your words struck me harmonious.
It made me think...
So long as I live, I will marvel at how you made me shine.
My heart changed and grew,
from a cool glow, sufficient to see
to warm fire, lending some comfort to others.
Gone or not, you still reach me,
Gone or not, I still reach for you.
Heart broken, but better for the gift of you.
[I took the liberty of fixing the formatting of your lines... please forgive me if you think it presumptuous; I meant it in respect. It can be undone.]
