Hi midicon! It's great to see you here.
Sorry, but I missed your post first time round.
I'll add my voice and vote to to those of Quantum12 and argentus in saying how much I enjoyed your poem.
After the first few stanzas, I was reminded of Coleridge's 'The Rime of the Ancient Mariner'. It was more than just rhymes cobbled together; you managed to tell a tale... a very enjoyable one at that.
If you write, especially as you do, then you are a writer. I remember your other works on ATS and you could easily self-publish a collection; even if it's just to share your creativity. Whatever you do, let's remember another ATS member, Dapaga, and his humble phrase...
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Sorry, but I missed your post first time round.
I'll add my voice and vote to to those of Quantum12 and argentus in saying how much I enjoyed your poem.
After the first few stanzas, I was reminded of Coleridge's 'The Rime of the Ancient Mariner'. It was more than just rhymes cobbled together; you managed to tell a tale... a very enjoyable one at that.
If you write, especially as you do, then you are a writer. I remember your other works on ATS and you could easily self-publish a collection; even if it's just to share your creativity. Whatever you do, let's remember another ATS member, Dapaga, and his humble phrase...
