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Quantum12 · 10-21-2024, 10:04 AM

The shadow…

The air of love was so clear,
Time Long ago I was lost,

Seas of love and warmth took us away,
The cloud of warm rain told me your name.

It was you who was moved by me,
A shadow close to the sea kissed my lips.

The rising waters edge was your hands pulling at me,
All the lost fish over the sea found you for me.

As the earth saw the blue moon,
The shadow behind you was me...

**Encia22** · 10-21-2024, 10:47 AM

I've got the balcony doors of my office open and a slight autumn breeze came in as I read your dreamy poem... perfect, Quantum12.

Beer

Quantum12 · This post was last modified 10-21-2024, 11:09 AM by Quantum12.

(10-21-2024, 10:47 AM)Encia22 Wrote: I've got the balcony doors of my office open and a slight autumn breeze came in as I read your dreamy poem... perfect, Quantum12.

The breeze can bring in amazing things!

Thank you kindly for reading this!

**xpert11** · This post was last modified 10-22-2024, 07:35 AM by xpert11.

(10-21-2024, 10:04 AM)Quantum12 Wrote: The shadow…

The air of love was so clear,
Time Long ago I was lost,

Thank you for opening up spring days to your poetry.

Quantum12 · 10-22-2024, 07:47 AM

Thank you, the spring always brings warmth of energy to this world. Fall has at all. I love fall!

We have to keep creating with writing!

CCoburn · 10-22-2024, 08:31 AM

aah...there's nothing like the aroma of some freshly brewed metaphorical abstract and romantically inclined lines of thought first thing in the morning now is there?

Quantum12 · 10-22-2024, 09:26 AM

(10-22-2024, 08:31 AM)CCoburn Wrote: aah...there's nothing like the aroma of some freshly brewed metaphorical abstract and romantically inclined lines of thought first thing in the morning now is there?

Yes, haha it’s always a great way for another sunny day!

CCoburn · 10-22-2024, 09:33 AM

(10-22-2024, 09:26 AM)Quantum12 Wrote: Yes, haha it’s always a great way for another sunny day!

It’s always a great way
for another sunny day!

You just wrote another one. I like that. Like one of those micro poems Encia was talking about. I do that sometimes too without realizing it and then notice it after.

Quantum12 · 10-22-2024, 08:31 PM

(10-22-2024, 09:33 AM)CCoburn Wrote: It’s always a great way
for another sunny day!

You just wrote another one. I like that. Like one of those micro poems Encia was talking about. I do that sometimes too without realizing it and then notice it after.

Yes you do that amazing writing style!

JimmyDaniels1973 · 10-22-2024, 10:09 PM

It’s always brave to share your words.