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My purple world…
#1
[Image: uq4acKB.png]

Everything is beautiful as you sing,
Your voice of mighty sure can ring,

The time we last kissed I felt so high,
Like the purple diamond in the sky,

From the north and to the west,
It’s times like this I love best,

I sure do miss you in the sand,
Never should I have let go of your hand,

It’s times like this I got in trouble,
Next time I will never pop the bubble,

Purple lives in times of another,
Nothing rhymes with this color…
Be kind to everyone!
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(10-07-2024, 04:03 PM)Quantum12 Wrote: [Image: https://i.imgur.com/uq4acKB.png]

Everything is beautiful as you sing,
Your voice of mighty sure can ring,

The time we last kissed I felt so high,
Like the purple diamond in the sky,

From the north and to the west,
It’s times like this I love best,

I sure do miss you in the sand,
Never should I have let go of your hand,

It’s times like this I got in trouble,
Next time I will never pop the bubble,

Purple lives in times of another,
Nothing rhymes with this color…

That got me thinking Quantum! Prince or Jimmy!

A fitting tribute! Got to love purple!

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#3
Wow! You are so in tune!
Quote: Well he came down to earth and he lit in a tree
I said Mr. Purple People Eater, don’t eat me
I heard him say in a voice so gruff
I wouldn’t eat you cuz you’re so tough
One-eyed, one-horned, flyin’ purple people eater

(10-07-2024, 10:43 PM)midicon Wrote: That got me thinking Quantum! Prince or Jimmy!

A fitting tribute! Got to love purple!

S+F...oops...rate + rep!
Be kind to everyone!
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#4
(10-07-2024, 04:03 PM)Quantum12 Wrote: ...

Purple lives in times of another,
Nothing rhymes with this color…

I love the last line, JJ. A bit of comic relief is always good.

You guys thought of Jimmy and Prince, my first thought always goes to Deep Purple when I read, see or think that colour.

The beautiful image compliments your poem well, too. 10/10

Beer
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(10-08-2024, 04:49 AM)Encia22 Wrote: I love the last line, JJ. A bit of comic relief is always good.

I enjoyed that line as well. May the Deny Ignorance fiction writing community live long and prosper.
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(10-08-2024, 04:49 AM)Encia22 Wrote: I love the last line, JJ. A bit of comic relief is always good.

You guys thought of Jimmy and Prince, my first thought always goes to Deep Purple when I read, see or think that colour.

The beautiful image compliments your poem well, too. 10/10

Beer

Thank you kindly! I look forward to your amazing writings
Be kind to everyone!
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