09-21-2024, 08:08 AM
Sailboat of Time
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09-21-2024, 08:13 AM
(09-21-2024, 08:08 AM)CCoburn Wrote: Yeah, we could try that sometime. Maybe start a thread in Chit Chat or something beforehand for ideas. No rush though, there's plenty else to do here in the meantime. No rush! We could write about the time you traveled the universe in your past life and the crazy things you did to survive.
Be kind to everyone!
09-21-2024, 12:46 PM
Great poem, Quantum12!
I'm glad you added the backstory because I was struggling with the subtext. I love watching competition sailing and have followed the America's Cup since the early 2000s; the Louis Vuitton Cup being the most recent event. So, my mind just stayed in sailing mode whilst reading your work. All the while knowing there was more too it, but couldn't pin it down. The story that inspired your poem is pretty dramatic and frightening and you captured its essence perfectly.
09-21-2024, 01:11 PM
(09-21-2024, 12:46 PM)Encia22 Wrote: Great poem, Quantum12! Thank you kindly! I love sailing. In Michigan they have the Race to Mackinac island sail boat race!
Be kind to everyone!
09-21-2024, 01:23 PM
(09-21-2024, 01:11 PM)Quantum12 Wrote: Thank you kindly! I love sailing. In Michigan they have the Race to Mackinac island sail boat race! Thanks, I hadn't come across that competition. I saw some images of the event and those boats are beautiful, especially when the wind fills those colourful spinnakers. I also read that they recently completed the 115th race... so it's been going on for a long time.
09-21-2024, 01:51 PM
(09-21-2024, 01:23 PM)Encia22 Wrote: Thanks, I hadn't come across that competition. I saw some images of the event and those boats are beautiful, especially when the wind fills those colourful spinnakers. When I write I forget that the output is coming from my head and no one knows what I am talking about lol. You always figure it out lol!
Be kind to everyone!
(09-21-2024, 01:51 PM)Quantum12 Wrote: When I write I forget that the output is coming from my head and no one knows what I am talking about lol. Thanks, but it hasn’t always been the case. Some of your works have had me thinking outside the box… hell, throw away the box; we’re in 4D chess, tesseract territory. Quantum by name, quantum by nature.
09-22-2024, 08:02 AM
(09-21-2024, 07:39 AM)Quantum12 Wrote: You me and midicon should write a collaborative writing story. He is a deep writer. I'm going to create a thread in Chit Chat called: New Writing Ideas. I could also put it in Collaborative Writing, but I'll go for more general purpose just to cover some extra bases. Any ideas can go there if ever/whenever someone gets around to it. I don't always write every day, but when I'm here I'm usually writing, something.
09-22-2024, 09:10 AM
(09-22-2024, 08:02 AM)CCoburn Wrote: I'm going to create a thread in Chit Chat called: New Writing Ideas. I could also put it in Collaborative Writing, but I'll go for more general purpose just to cover some extra bases. Perfect!
Be kind to everyone!
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