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The Forest In Your Mind… - Quantum12 - 10-22-2024

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Deep in the forest I found the light,
Away deep back while it was night.

The bends of trees touched my soul,
All this running has taken its toll.

This was the night of heavens dancers from the leaves,
After my blindness left me I followed the trees.

Out came the rope,
I screamed to the pope.

The tree spirit counted to three,
And there I was dead on my knees...

I begged them to have mercy for me,
The head honcho told me he has to disagree.


RE: The Forest In Your Mind… - UltraBudgie - 10-22-2024

Doesn't that picture make you think that in about another 300 yards you're going to encounter Mr Tumnus?


RE: The Forest In Your Mind… - Quantum12 - 10-22-2024

(10-22-2024, 09:52 AM)UltraBudgie Wrote: Doesn't that picture make you think that in about another 300 yards you're going to encounter Mr Tumnus?
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Hahaha I was also hoping that C. S. Lewis could come out and help us!


RE: The Forest In Your Mind… - Kurokage - 10-22-2024

I don't know why but it reminded me of this song...




RE: The Forest In Your Mind… - Quantum12 - 10-22-2024

(10-22-2024, 11:09 AM)Kurokage Wrote: I don't know why but it reminded me of this song...

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Wow your song is amazing! Thank you!

“I was listenin' to the ocean
I saw a face in the sand
But when I picked it up
Then it vanished away from my hands, dah
I had a dream, I was seven
Climbin' my way in a tree
I saw a piece of Heaven
Waitin' in patience for me, dah”

Love this first part too!


RE: The Forest In Your Mind… - Kurokage - 10-22-2024

(10-22-2024, 11:34 AM)Quantum12 Wrote: Wow your song is amazing! Thank you!

“I was listenin' to the ocean
I saw a face in the sand
But when I picked it up
Then it vanished away from my hands, dah
I had a dream, I was seven
Climbin' my way in a tree
I saw a piece of Heaven
Waitin' in patience for me, dah”

Love this first part too!

The crazy thing is she wrote that when she was 11/12 years old!?!?


RE: The Forest In Your Mind… - Quantum12 - 10-22-2024

(10-22-2024, 12:11 PM)Kurokage Wrote: The crazy thing is she wrote that when she was 11/12 years old!?!?

She is amazing! That is really young to write this amazing song!

Thank you for posting this!!!I love this song!


RE: The Forest In Your Mind… - Encia22 - 10-23-2024

(10-22-2024, 09:38 AM)Quantum12 Wrote: ...

The tree spirit counted to three,
And there I was dead on my knees...

I begged them to have mercy for me,
The head honcho told me he has to disagree.

Ooh, this conjured up memories of Lord of The Rings and the Ents… Treebeard & Co. in Fangorn forest.

Excellent, Quantum12!

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RE: The Forest In Your Mind… - Quantum12 - 10-23-2024

(10-23-2024, 05:56 AM)Encia22 Wrote: Ooh, this conjured up memories of Lord of The Rings and the Ents… Treebeard & Co. in Fangorn forest.

Excellent, Quantum12!

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Thank you! It brought up emotions while writing! Beer