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Inside of love… - Quantum12 - 10-20-2024

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Meeting within your love of gold,
Time stood still around the rose.

Nights baked around your lovely soul,
Time calls all names into this world.

Thinking of you time again,
Seeing faces in the wind.

Our love is near the resting gardens of time,
Clouds of love hold you strong.

Seeping eyes of soldiers marching us away,
Time and love heal the past.

I met your soul before I saw you,

Let the inside of love be strong…

RE: Inside of love… - UltraBudgie - 10-20-2024

thank you that is very beautiful; the winsome meets the wind song...

RE: Inside of love… - Quantum12 - 10-20-2024

(10-20-2024, 11:10 AM)UltraBudgie Wrote: thank you that is very beautiful; the winsome meets the wind song...

Thank you kindly for reading this and your reply!

RE: Inside of love… - xpert11 - 10-20-2024

(10-20-2024, 11:04 AM)Quantum12 Wrote: Thinking of you time again,
Seeing faces in the wind.

I love your wording. Beer


RE: Inside of love… - Quantum12 - 10-20-2024


Thank you! It was written for someone I will never meet in person in this lifetime.

RE: Inside of love… - Maxmars - 10-20-2024

I am always struck by the impulse to respond with imagery of my own!

You have inspired me... again.

Thank you...

RE: Inside of love… - Quantum12 - 10-20-2024

(10-20-2024, 07:06 PM)Maxmars Wrote: I am always struck by the impulse to respond with imagery of my own!

You have inspired me... again.

Thank you...

You are so kind! Thank you for you!

RE: Inside of love… - Encia22 - 10-21-2024

(10-20-2024, 11:04 AM)Quantum12 Wrote: Inside of love…

Beautiful, Quantum12! I always enjoy these kind of poems, for which you have really fine-tuned your repertoire since I've been reading your work. 

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RE: Inside of love… - Quantum12 - 10-21-2024

(10-21-2024, 05:23 AM)Encia22 Wrote: Beautiful, Quantum12! I always enjoy these kind of poems, for which you have really fine-tuned your repertoire since I've been reading your work. 

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Thank you Encia! I appreciate you! It takes a lot of practice to write. Everyone writes different and in amazing ways.

Some of the things I have written are not good lol

RE: Inside of love… - Encia22 - 10-21-2024

(10-21-2024, 07:10 AM)Quantum12 Wrote: Thank you Encia! I appreciate you! It takes a lot of practice to write. Everyone writes different and in amazing ways.

Some of the things I have written are not good lol

I think that if we are driven to write, it is primarily for ourselves. If it eases our pains and angsts; relieves our rage and fury; records a funny moment or joyous occasion, then it doesn’t matter how good or bad it is.

I don’t want to sound like a broken record, but I’ll post again our friend, Dapaga’s quote, from a while ago…

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