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Girl - CCoburn - 09-30-2024
Girl
Halo or horn christened descent
Does it even matter
It's not really the point
Pun intended
Layers upon serpentine layers
The illusion of color
Rendering of splendor
swirling down
Captivating concealment about
The eyes tell a story
Erotic increments unfold
Lipstick smiles
Slender broad and succulent
Venusian hourglass
Middle of the median
Magic abound
Limbs of melded muscle
Form and function
Intoxicating movements
most graceful
Terminus bearing rhythm
Teasing of earth
with spirit commands
from nowhere...
Girl
RE: Girl - Encia22 - 09-30-2024
Very interesting. I read it yeaterday and it struck a chord. Seeing it again today, now it's clear; in my mind I see Salome dancing.
Congrats on your writer status!
RE: Girl - CCoburn - 10-01-2024
(09-30-2024, 12:34 PM)Encia22 Wrote: Very interesting. I read it yesterday and it struck a chord. Seeing it again today, now it's clear; in my mind I see Salome dancing.
Congrats on your writer status!
Thanks. It was largely an exercise in structure. I tried to avoid using the "girl" terminology, but nothing else I could think of seemed to work quite as well.
Yes, me and Quantum12 both got those snazzy gold writing banners around the same time we started that collaborative "writing" project.
Cheers
