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RE: Almost Home - Quantum12 - 11-05-2024
(11-05-2024, 12:17 PM)Moon68 Wrote: I had the last reply on the Acronym game
lol! That is a hard one. Should have been in your amazing story!
RE: Almost Home - Encia22 - 11-05-2024
So demoralising yet poignant, Moon. War is damaging in every sense, however, your protagonist's decline could have been caused by any number of circumstances.
It just demonstrates how fragile we all are and how easily our lives can be rendered topsy turvy; and hardly ever for the better... bread always seems to fall butter side down?
Story-wise, I liked the various timelines overlapping.
RE: Almost Home - Moon68 - 11-05-2024
(11-05-2024, 01:17 PM)Encia22 Wrote: So demoralising yet poignant, Moon. War is damaging in every sense, however, your protagonist's decline could have been caused by any number of circumstances.
It just demonstrates how fragile we all are and how easily our lives can be rendered topsy turvy; and hardly ever for the better... bread always seems to fall butter side down?
Story-wise, I liked the various timelines overlapping.
Thank you very much for reading Encia and taking the time to share your thoughts. I appreciate all feedback.
