07-08-2024, 12:15 PM
(07-06-2024, 05:06 PM)argentus Wrote: I mean, the more I read it, and stomp the cadence in my head, the more I realise I'm in the presence of greatness. This is an amazing work. If you aren't making money with your lyrics, please consider a life change.
Apologies for this late reply Argentus, I was sort of taken aback by your comment.
That poem was never intended to be a song, perhaps you assumed that from my introduction post, which is fine of course.
It's just a throwaway little rhyme that to my mind doesn't qualify as poetry or anything really. I just wanted to post something here, which in hindsight might not have been a good idea.
I am not a writer so anything I do write is basically amateurish and schoolboyish. I am happy with my level, it is what it is.
I'll get to the point of this reply. When you say things like "in the presence of greatness" or even "amazing', I think this must be sarcasm then I think, a mod wouldn't do that and yet the comment was too 'over the top'. Somehow I'm left discomfited by the whole thing, which I know is silly. Perhaps as a kindness you might remove this thread for me.