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Tinker the Cat
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(07-06-2024, 05:06 PM)argentus Wrote: I mean, the more I read it, and stomp the cadence in my head, the more I realise I'm in the presence of greatness.   This is an amazing work.   If you aren't making money with your lyrics, please consider a life change.

​​​​​​Apologies for this late reply Argentus, I was sort of taken aback by your comment.


That poem was never intended to be a song, perhaps you assumed that from my introduction post, which is fine of course.

It's just a throwaway little rhyme that to my mind doesn't qualify as poetry or anything really. I just wanted to post something here, which in hindsight might not have been a good idea.

I am not a writer so anything I do write is basically amateurish and schoolboyish. I am happy with my level, it is what it is.

I'll get to the point of this reply. When you say things like "in the presence of greatness" or even "amazing', I think this must be sarcasm then I think, a mod wouldn't do that and yet the comment was too 'over the top'. Somehow I'm left discomfited by the whole thing, which I know is silly. Perhaps as a kindness you might remove this thread for me.
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Messages In This Thread
Tinker the Cat - by midicon - 06-24-2024, 04:36 PM
RE: Tinker the Cat - by Quantum12 - 07-06-2024, 12:02 PM
RE: Tinker the Cat - by midicon - 07-06-2024, 01:21 PM
RE: Tinker the Cat - by Quantum12 - 07-06-2024, 01:37 PM
RE: Tinker the Cat - by argentus - 07-06-2024, 03:37 PM
RE: Tinker the Cat - by midicon - 07-06-2024, 04:10 PM
RE: Tinker the Cat - by argentus - 07-06-2024, 05:06 PM
RE: Tinker the Cat - by midicon - 07-08-2024, 12:15 PM
RE: Tinker the Cat - by Quantum12 - 07-06-2024, 04:21 PM
RE: Tinker the Cat - by argentus - 07-08-2024, 12:33 PM
RE: Tinker the Cat - by midicon - 07-08-2024, 01:09 PM
RE: Tinker the Cat - by Encia22 - 07-08-2024, 02:49 PM
RE: Tinker the Cat - by midicon - 07-08-2024, 03:11 PM
RE: Tinker the Cat - by Byrd - 07-10-2024, 05:43 PM
RE: Tinker the Cat - by midicon - 07-10-2024, 09:13 PM
RE: Tinker the Cat - by schuyler - 07-10-2024, 05:48 PM

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