THE COLLECTIVE (SCI-FI -- A ONE PAGE STORY)

[ANNEE]

Thanks for your faceted story, Annee. You drew me into your utopic world, making me envious of it. But, as you expanded on the daily routine, I fell out of love with that place. It seemed like a perfect world, but without space or time for dialogue, love and creativity. A community without those few important ingredients, would never advance beyond people just working as the ants or the bees do.

Yes, they had food, but not food for thought.

Thank you -- yes, you got it.

I only do one-page stories and they usually have a twist to them.

ANNEE