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Literary Plaques/Graphics
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(07-27-2024, 12:22 PM)Encia22 Wrote: Excellent!

Beer

I did try revising it to eliminate some word redundancy and extending it a bit at the end, but the flow from beginning to end took a blow, so I regressed.

Could maybe use another color change around the last stanza, and failed to remove a semi-colon that no longer needed to be there, but I'll just call it good for now and move on to the next one in my next writing session for this thread.

I think AI is my new best friend, and thanks for all the rates.

Cheers

Beer
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Literary Plaques/Graphics - by CCoburn - 07-20-2024, 04:45 PM
RE: Literary Plaques/Graphics - by Encia22 - 07-20-2024, 07:05 PM
RE: Literary Plaques/Graphics - by CCoburn - 07-22-2024, 09:11 PM
RE: Literary Plaques/Graphics - by CCoburn - 07-21-2024, 05:47 PM
RE: Literary Plaques/Graphics - by CCoburn - 07-22-2024, 04:53 AM
RE: Literary Plaques/Graphics - by Encia22 - 07-23-2024, 02:09 PM
RE: Literary Plaques/Graphics - by CCoburn - 07-23-2024, 09:56 PM
RE: Literary Plaques/Graphics - by Encia22 - 07-24-2024, 07:33 AM
RE: Literary Plaques/Graphics - by CCoburn - 07-24-2024, 07:30 PM
RE: Literary Plaques/Graphics - by CCoburn - 07-26-2024, 05:20 PM
RE: Literary Plaques/Graphics - by Encia22 - 07-27-2024, 12:22 PM
RE: Literary Plaques/Graphics - by CCoburn - 07-27-2024, 03:56 PM
RE: Literary Plaques/Graphics - by Maxmars - 07-26-2024, 08:38 PM

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