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HORIZON – A LOVE STORY (I write one page stories)
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Magic is the true meaning of words in our life. Keep them pure and true.
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A profound love story, Annee!
 
I like how you begin with a question, one that I could relate to and answer affirmatively. From that point, I felt part of your narrative. Leaving the end open made me look to that “virtual” horizon for the possible outcome, thus looping back to your first paragraph’s premise.

Beer
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(11-27-2023, 06:48 AM)music is magic Wrote: Magic is the true meaning of words in our life. Keep them pure and true.

Thank you.  Yes, we all must have a little magic in our lives.

ANNEE

(11-27-2023, 09:43 AM)Encia22 Wrote: A profound love story, Annee!
 
I like how you begin with a question, one that I could relate to and answer affirmatively. From that point, I felt part of your narrative. Leaving the end open made me look to that “virtual” horizon for the possible outcome, thus looping back to your first paragraph’s premise.

Beer


Thank you.

Just because the magic may have connected these two -- there are still lost souls out in the horizon who may, through the magic, find their way too.

ANNEE
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