(10-21-2024, 05:06 AM)Encia22 Wrote: Wow, utterly fascinating, xpert11.
I can't explain it any other way than I felt like I was 'reading' a Salvador Dali painting... if that makes sense.
And, just like the Master's paintings, I get lost in it; I keep on reading your poem and keep finding new details... and can't escape the 'canvas'.
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Thank you for the feedback. My goal has been to avoid writing my usual fare to prevent going overboard with historical fiction and thinly disguised takes on current events and possible future wars. (Of course, that assumes I can extract decent tales from those matters and not just me boring the reader by making specific points under a fictional guise).
However, I enjoy avoiding logical story outlines with my experimental poetry/writing.
